I am 13 so don't judge

[name]

Staring at my computer screen
watching the cursor blink
there and gone and there again
listening to the sound of failure
The clock chime 1,2,3,4,5
sitting blankly no movement but the cursor
no sound but the clock ticking loudly
“out of time” over and over
I sat in darkness nothing
but worries to fill my head
With deadlines hanging over me
threatening to crush me
The only light comes from my computer screen
and my window
for the first time in hours I turn
to natural light then it hits me
The great outside
beautiful colors shining brightly through my window
I hear the melody of birds song so sweet and sad
telling me stories
singing songs and telling me to go,
to move, to be someone
Then adrenaline starts to pump in my veins
and something else,
something I thought I had lost, inspiration
quick moving typing like a mad man I write
my passion blazing,
Inspiration strikes


I am 13 so my poetry isn't that good 

[fane]

you obviously need improvement, but your not horrible. that is just my opinion. if you think your good then you are.

[DeathsEye]

Name I see that you have a sparkle of talent inside of you...of course you need to excersize to become better but I see that you have the basics to write good poems...keep doing it and I am.sure that one day you'll write a lot of good poems like this and better ones...I liked it but in some points the flow of the poem was a little out of subject....but its still cool though :)Remember big artists come from small steps of improvement,no one is born a big artist but became one...